
IM in college and doing English, I've wrote 5 novels this is my 6th one plz tell me what you think about it?
This is only 1st chapter and bit of 2nd chapter Im going to point to 80 to 90 chapters to finish novel
The way we have written your question makes me doubt that you are in college, but that does not mean that you have not written several novels. Therefore, in addition, I think his writing has weight to some, but that is compromised by their lack of technical skill. You have some good ideas for plot and character, but have not yet learned to develop them (that is simply saying, instead of development). That said, I hope not giving up. Just realize that good writing takes more story ideas and discipline to write (although these are very important - and you are ahead of many people when it comes to that). Now you have to study the craft. Working on your grammar, syntax, character development, and design techniques. Not only have to write a good novel, you want to get it published. Publishers only read so far in text. If you do not know the basics of good writing (including all rules of grammar, punctuation, etc.), just stop reading.
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